I thoroughly enjoyed reading this post! It attacked all of the senses through descriptive language which created a distinct scene to visualise. I enjoyed the mysterious, mystical theme, it made it feel like the power of nature and the storm you witnessed is otherworldly. The vocabulary was diverse but specific to the situation, this allowed it all to flow nicely. My only critique is to double check grammar, I noticed in second sentence on the fifth paragraph that the e in Earth was left lower case but needed an uppercase. Aside from this I think this was an excellent piece of writing.
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