Cameron the emotion that came out in your writing was excellent. Through evocative words you created the connection and emotion that you felt with this location. Knowing that you’ve visited and experienced the majesty of this location allows for an extra layer of meaning to unfold in your writing. It wasn’t as if you were writing a description of this artwork so as much as you were describing your own personal experience. Thoroughly enjoyed the read!
Peer Review Three
Jared Marks' Brain 