Grace I found this to be a great post! I loved the fact you included some of your emotion into this as well as a layer of logic. I think you had some interesting observations and comments on the idea of Australia not being a finished product and managed to link this to the ideaContinueContinue reading “Peer review four”
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Peer Review Three
Cameron the emotion that came out in your writing was excellent. Through evocative words you created the connection and emotion that you felt with this location. Knowing that you’ve visited and experienced the majesty of this location allows for an extra layer of meaning to unfold in your writing. It wasn’t as if you wereContinueContinue reading “Peer Review Three”
Peer review two
I enjoyed reading the piece. I feel it was an apt and real representation of the artwork. In saying that, I have two points of constructive criticism. Firstly, I think adding the actual topic you’re responding to would be helpful for the reader. Secondly, I think rereading and assessing the sixth paragraph might be helpful.ContinueContinue reading “Peer review two”
Peer review one
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this post! It attacked all of the senses through descriptive language which created a distinct scene to visualise. I enjoyed the mysterious, mystical theme, it made it feel like the power of nature and the storm you witnessed is otherworldly. The vocabulary was diverse but specific to the situation, this allowedContinueContinue reading “Peer review one”
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